Hi Everyone, and Visionary,

In an attempt to finish off the mini-plot I started in the plot-less Anniversary story I need your help with some notes for writing Magweed and Griffin. (Not that many people read and replied..)

Anything you can offer would be much appreciated and useful, but specifically –

What do they call Hallie? (Hallie? Mummy? Hey you? Other?)

Can Griff still go invis? For that matter do you have a good description of both their ‘powers’?

Anything else you think pertinent to know?

Much appreciation and thanks will come your way for taking the time to assist.

And there may even be a story out of it (let’s hope so).

Cheerio for now.

Al B

Hallie's their "Mom", while Miiri is their "Mother".



Griffin can indeed go invisible and intangible still, leaving him undetectable. When he's in this state, he can also speak so that only Maggie is able to hear him. He has a photographic memory and secretly has assorted facts from Hallie's mainframe bouncing around his brain, a side affect of her incubating him.

Maggie's powers are all gifts from her godmothers, including friendship and understanding with animals, general good luck, and the ability to see people's true hearts enough to determine if they are friends or enemies.



Um... the lab mice that Al gave her are usually about keeping an eye on things. Maggie is still scarred and infirm with a bad arm and leg


Well, that would be more than thanks enough. Besides, there are mysterious goings on to unravel...

Appreciate your informative response. More pressure on me to come through with the story now.

Al B.