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 Subject: The next bit of Untold Tales is posted below - and so is the next next bit.
Posted Fri Jul 04, 2008 at 05:45:28 am EDT

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Here's the link: Untold Tales #328




Manga Shoggoth


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 Subject: Ditching the St Trinians discussion... [Re: HH]
Posted Fri Jul 04, 2008 at 08:24:03 am EDT (Viewed 565 times)

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Another interesting mix. It is nice to see Kerry using her powers in such an inventive way (althouhgh not nearly as politely as her sister).

We really need a sketch of the hoover ship sometime...




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Visionary's on vacation and needs summer reading material.


 Subject: Okay, read and replied. What else do you have? [Re: HH]
Posted Fri Jul 04, 2008 at 10:49:02 am EDT

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> Here's the link: Untold Tales #328





HH


 Subject: Re: Ditching the St Trinians discussion... [Re: Manga Shoggoth]
Posted Fri Jul 04, 2008 at 01:51:30 pm EDT

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> Another interesting mix. It is nice to see Kerry using her powers in such an inventive way (althouhgh not nearly as politely as her sister).
> We really need a sketch of the hoover ship sometime...

I'm sure somebody could doctor a photograph.




HH


 Subject: Well, you could always write that Great North Star story. [Re: Visionary's on vacation and needs summer reading material.]
Posted Fri Jul 04, 2008 at 02:18:42 pm EDT

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> > Here's the link: Untold Tales #328





CrazySugarFreakBoy!

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 Subject: A nice diversion, while I work during my Fourth of July holiday. [Re: HH]
Posted Fri Jul 04, 2008 at 06:47:43 pm EDT (Viewed 581 times)

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Visionary is sorry to hear you had to work.


 Subject: It's not like you veterans don't already get 2 holidays off a year... [Re: CrazySugarFreakBoy!]
Posted Sat Jul 05, 2008 at 12:43:59 am EDT

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 Subject: Yeah, but I'll already know the ending when I read that. [Re: HH]
Posted Sat Jul 05, 2008 at 12:44:58 am EDT

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> > > Here's the link: Untold Tales #328





Manga Shoggoth


Member Since: Fri Jan 02, 2004
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 Subject: It's Monday and I'm too tired to make puns in subject lines. [Re: HH]
Posted Mon Jul 07, 2008 at 06:48:17 am EDT (Viewed 547 times)

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(Plus there is all the added security around London today...)

>     Ã¢â‚¬Å“I an High Priest of Raathi!” proclaimed Serooq. “I see more than other men. I do what I have to. What I see myself doing.”

That makes him one incredible peeping tom...

>     Ã¢â‚¬Å“I am High Priest of Raathi,” scorned Serooq. “My powers protect me from any blade.”
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>     Miiri’s Mythlands daggers were enchanted to cut through magics, and poisoned Ohanna was her sister. Her slash took Serooq right in the windpipe. The high priest rasped once, stared at the freewoman with a horrified realisation, then toppled dead.

There's always one. Two in this case.

>     Ã¢â‚¬Å“I shall cut those whelps from your swollen bellies and feast upon them,” Troovis promised the pregnant Caphans.

Caphan cusine has a lot to answer for...

>     Losiira ducked low away from his first slice, then rolled forwards to apply her needle-thin houri dagger with the precision a Caphan pleasure slave was expected to use against raiders who sought to carry her off or harm her children; one sharp thrust to penetrate the scrotum then a hard twist and slash.
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>     Ã¢â‚¬Å“Textbook,” admired Kriije from the floor as Troovis went down screaming.

I like this scene.

>     ... All Caph had heard Serooq’s treasonous choice.

Unless Kiivan loses, in which case it will be given a different blur.

>     Ã¢â‚¬Å“Oh shut up, you dick!” snapped Herbert P. Garrick, his patience finally exhausted. He hammered a fist into the nearest guard, took the man’s sword off him, and hurled it into Jaan’s back. Bad News Herb was, after all, a trained G-Man. Nobody was assassinating a head of state on his watch.

I know Garrick is supposed to be one of the annoyances, but I do like the occasional scenes like this.

>     The moment was so intense that nobody noticed at first that the vacuum-ship above had completed its preparations and the nozzles were descending to draw all life from Caph.

Question: What happens if - improbably - all the nozzles end up pointing to each other when he switches it on?




As is always the case with my writing, please feel free to comment. I welcome both positive and negative criticism of my work, although I cannot promise to enjoy the negative.
HH


 Subject: At least you guys get a holiday. [Re: CrazySugarFreakBoy!]
Posted Tue Jul 08, 2008 at 02:19:40 pm EDT

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CrazySugarFreakBoy!


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 Subject: Speaking on behalf of America, Britain is perfectly free to take a national day off to celebrate how awesome we are for kicking your asses. :) [Re: HH]
Posted Tue Jul 08, 2008 at 07:00:20 pm EDT (Viewed 631 times)

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HH


 Subject: We must be thankful for small mercies [Re: Manga Shoggoth]
Posted Sun Jul 13, 2008 at 02:07:51 pm EDT

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> (Plus there is all the added security around London today...)

The price of freedom is eternal vigilence.

> >     Ã¢â‚¬Å“I an High Priest of Raathi!” proclaimed Serooq. “I see more than other men. I do what I have to. What I see myself doing.”
> That makes him one incredible peeping tom...

Maybe he's a helpless pawn of fate.

> >     Ã¢â‚¬Å“I am High Priest of Raathi,” scorned Serooq. “My powers protect me from any blade.”
> >     Miiri’s Mythlands daggers were enchanted to cut through magics, and poisoned Ohanna was her sister. Her slash took Serooq right in the windpipe. The high priest rasped once, stared at the freewoman with a horrified realisation, then toppled dead.

> There's always one. Two in this case.

It does give a compelling reason for Miiri to live on a different planet.

> >     Ã¢â‚¬Å“I shall cut those whelps from your swollen bellies and feast upon them,” Troovis promised the pregnant Caphans.

> Caphan cusine has a lot to answer for...

It's all that reeb toor oil.

> >     Losiira ducked low away from his first slice, then rolled forwards to apply her needle-thin houri dagger with the precision a Caphan pleasure slave was expected to use against raiders who sought to carry her off or harm her children; one sharp thrust to penetrate the scrotum then a hard twist and slash.
> >     Ã¢â‚¬Å“Textbook,” admired Kriije from the floor as Troovis went down screaming.

> I like this scene.

Troovis didn't.

> >     ... All Caph had heard Serooq’s treasonous choice.

> Unless Kiivan loses, in which case it will be given a different blur.

Possibly.

> >     Ã¢â‚¬Å“Oh shut up, you dick!” snapped Herbert P. Garrick, his patience finally exhausted. He hammered a fist into the nearest guard, took the man’s sword off him, and hurled it into Jaan’s back. Bad News Herb was, after all, a trained G-Man. Nobody was assassinating a head of state on his watch.

> I know Garrick is supposed to be one of the annoyances, but I do like the occasional scenes like this.

It stops him being completely one dimensional.

> >     The moment was so intense that nobody noticed at first that the vacuum-ship above had completed its preparations and the nozzles were descending to draw all life from Caph.

> Question: What happens if - improbably - all the nozzles end up pointing to each other when he switches it on?

It would probably be bad. Unfortunately Galactivac is the one entity that can definitely trump Kerry's power.




HH


 Subject: I think it would be a "Wow, we finally got them out of the house" sentiment. [Re: CrazySugarFreakBoy!]
Posted Sun Jul 13, 2008 at 02:17:55 pm EDT

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