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Subj: It suffers from the usual weakness that dooms this stuff...
Posted: Wed May 19, 2010 at 02:24:37 pm EDT (Viewed 790 times)
Reply Subj: I'm surprised this one wasn't used.
Posted: Wed May 19, 2010 at 12:13:34 pm EDT (Viewed 791 times)


It just doesn't advance a plot in any way shape or form. These kinds of moments are fine as bits between actual plot, but there's no actual *story* there, just a recap of story that's already been told. I probably saved it for possible inclusion in another tale, but never found an appropriate place to use it. It would have been out-of-place padding in the stories that did get written, so it remained on the lists of edits.






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