> I always enjoy the addition of atmosphere to your stories, whether it results in a wet Keiko scene or not. Here, we get some fun interaction with the detectives and Al B. Harper, plus the bonus run in with Yuki. And we seem to get Yuki's original name! Somehow, naming her "Ms. Moore" seems appropriate...
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That's funny considering I always pick names from the program guide for random movies on cable.
| > I also see you've found a new opening for the Chiaki/Yuki/Akiko showdown you imagined. I look forward to seeing it play out...
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I hope it does this time.
